six pm
What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
Stacie Cherill Dickson Amazing Brandi
Supernatural Peace Belongs To Us
rmendless You are a gift, share this with your parents, its beautiful
Parents
rmendless Share your writing with your parents, they wont know how you feel
A Child
Joy St.John Johnson this is my poem -what are you doing copying it and putting your name and different title on it?
My Eyes
DHARMA KSHMR fuck your grandma and their nine sons and daughters
my sad story ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
manisha Looks like you have loved so deepโค๏ธ
need you to know
manisha So deep... seems like you are going through some tough time in your life... May god heal all_/\_
Life Is Finding Your True Self
dixie Esch Love the sensation of your words
White to Red
helen reyes Love this poem!
Lonely
poetry ghost I love how the suspense really builds up before it all drops in the ending. Nice poem ๐
Walking After Dark
poetry ghost Thanks so much ๐
The Land Beyond the Stars
Muniza Master Hi, I love your poem, itโs beautifully Vivid and splendid. ๐๐ฆโค๏ธ
cottage of new beginnings
Muniza Master Hi, I lov your poem, itโs pure golden and spectacular ๐๐๐ฆ
not a maze
Muniza Master Hi, your poemโs Truly Magnificent and Inspiring ๐๐๐
The Land Beyond the Stars
rose poems Iโve reread this like 4 times I love it, how u tied in Pluto, โeven if mine crumblesโ, amazing.
*apples, mirrors, snow
poetry ghost Thatโs what I was going for ๐. To bring a sense of home in misery and fear of getting better
Peaceful War
rose poems I love this
I choose to Love you
Wordlyliving Thank you so much for the positive feedback! It really means the world to me:)
Liver
six pm Of all the brevity, slice-of-life poems tend to be my favorite. I really enjoyed this delicate piece.
Observation
six pm What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
Liver