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I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.
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With the loss of hope and faith I can see this being a religious metaphor, however, (and I could be projecting) is this about a father figure who walks this plane?
six pm I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.
This One
six pm This poem went in a direction I didn't expect it to. I wonder if it's more that you don't 'need' help rather than that maybe you don't want it?
Peaceful War
six pm I like that you kept this in a paragraph of sorts. The shape is contained like a box and it adds to the confessional spirit of the work imo.
heights
Walter Daniel Tomeo When I write my art I don’t have specifics, every reader perceive things differently.
Can you heal me Father?
rose poems thank you :))
not a maze
six pm A labyrinth of roots and the ideas that blossom and bud.
garden
six pm Your refrains and the following remind me of philosophies that say, 'heaven is here on earth'. And I really like that.
The Land Beyond the Stars
six pm I like your subtle rhyme in maze and made. You have a really nice cadence.
not a maze
six pm With the loss of hope and faith I can see this being a religious metaphor, however, (and I could be projecting) is this about a father figure who walks this plane?
Can you heal me Father?
Janayah Tich this is an amazing peice of art
Liver
Walter Daniel Tomeo Thanks so much Dezii.
I may be a starseed
Dezii I love this so much
I may be a starseed
Muniza Master Hi, Your poem is magnificent.
Fortress of comforters
Mimi 🥰 🤗
Mobility Cane
Nody Femme 🤍🤍🤍🤍
RIGHT HERE! Pick Me!
Fatimatu Zakaria Amazing that's nice
Establishment
Fatimatu Zakaria Nice poem
Feels
maya i’m obsessed with this poem!!!
The love I know
Kenhymar Mitchel This is lovely♥️👏🏾
flowers
Genna Todd That’s a sweet poem
In Her Sight