Everyone

six pm I like that you kept this in a paragraph of sorts. The shape is contained like a box and it adds to the confessional spirit of the work imo.

heights

six pm A labyrinth of roots and the ideas that blossom and bud.

garden

six pm Your refrains and the following remind me of philosophies that say, 'heaven is here on earth'. And I really like that.

The Land Beyond the Stars

six pm I like your subtle rhyme in maze and made. You have a really nice cadence.

not a maze

six pm With the loss of hope and faith I can see this being a religious metaphor, however, (and I could be projecting) is this about a father figure who walks this plane?

Can you heal me Father?

kragneus 3rdto do with the real world only everything to do with the fallacy of the economic world.

Mirror....

kragneus pigmented skin tones not color; what color is a racist person game it has nothing

Mirror....